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  • E30AWDAZ
    Grease Monkey
    • Mar 2010
    • 399

    #16
    Good paper. You should try and climb mt everest one day do ittttt!

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    • e30mybaby
      E30 Addict
      • Jun 2010
      • 423

      #17
      haha i would love to! Just so expensive!
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      • Car Addict
        E30 Enthusiast
        • Mar 2007
        • 1100

        #18
        In formal writing "you" and "I" should not be used, unless it is specified by your professor.

        Good start though
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        • HarryPotter
          No R3VLimiter
          • Jan 2010
          • 3642

          #19
          Periods are for quitters, why stop


          "Its preparations are concealed, not published. Its mistakes are buried not headlined. Its dissenters are silenced, not praised. No expenditure is questioned, no rumor is printed, no secret is revealed."

          John F. Kennedy

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          • 5Toes
            Banned
            • May 2010
            • 9836

            #20
            Dude. Change title too. Something like:

            "What it feels like on the top"
            "I can see for miles and miles"

            I dont know. This title is too lame

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            • Mlarsen
              R3V Elite
              • Feb 2010
              • 4082

              #21
              Originally posted by SimplyDope
              I just watched 180 South (thanks to the documentary thread!) and I now want to go rock climbing!
              You welcome haha, climbing in the NW is awesome! I'm climbing Rainier this summer.

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              • e30mybaby
                E30 Addict
                • Jun 2010
                • 423

                #22
                Originally posted by Car Addict
                In formal writing "you" and "I" should not be used, unless it is specified by your professor.

                Good start though
                Its a narrative so you can use "you" and "I".
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