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  • ubernasty
    R3VLimited
    • Jan 2009
    • 2749

    #1

    Poster

    Poster for my photoimaging class. The project was a poster for a group of photographers, the text is basically just fill... any input?

    Last edited by ubernasty; 10-22-2009, 12:34 PM.
  • sector6
    E30 Modder
    • May 2009
    • 909

    #2
    i like the perspective. looks good.
    sigpic

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    • 87e30
      R3V Elite
      • Jul 2008
      • 5676

      #3
      What kills me is the reflection across the hood... top right corner looks empty to me, maybe a more traditional title would workout.
      Originally posted by z31maniac
      I just hate everyone.

      No need for discretion.

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      • TexasTerp
        No R3VLimiter
        • Jan 2009
        • 3541

        #4
        Little too much white space on top, reflection is a little strong but overall I really like it!
        stephenbrody.com

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        • ben312
          E30 Enthusiast
          • Jan 2009
          • 1139

          #5
          i like it but it seems like you have alot going on the hood and right hand side and not much happing on the passengers side.
          Originally posted by Beej '86 325es
          every time an M-tech 1 spoiler is destroyed, a baby seal dies.
          Originally posted by Jparkr
          The last thing we need are more of the retards on here thinking they are engineers too.
          87 325:83 jetta coupe:99 volvo c70:99 volvo s70

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          • sector6
            E30 Modder
            • May 2009
            • 909

            #6
            I like it the way it is w/too much white space/ reflection on hood. real life not studio. true and pure.
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            • ubernasty
              R3VLimited
              • Jan 2009
              • 2749

              #7
              thanks, i am reworking it based on my in class crit and comments on here, i'll post when its done.

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              • 325ix
                R3V OG
                • Aug 2009
                • 7783

                #8
                There is a little too much reflection and the date is hard to read. Maybe darken the date and move to the top right corner?

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                • ubernasty
                  R3VLimited
                  • Jan 2009
                  • 2749

                  #9
                  tried another one..

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                  • 32.5i
                    E30 Fanatic
                    • Sep 2005
                    • 1336

                    #10
                    The first one everything is fine except the Sponsored by text.. it looks thrown together last second.. try separating with bullet points or using logos

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