Löwnslöw iPad drawing

[10-66kruk]

I like it, and impressive to learn the program...

I do see some flaws though, if you're interested. [not that I can do anything like this, but just as far as consistency is concerned by my own opinionated eyes of course]

Of course any constructive criticism is welcome. It just helps me for next time.
I know the front bumper is a little sloppy. Please feel free though.

mr2peak transportation design in your future?

I'm leaning more towards graphic design based work. Just trying to get more thing done in the lines of digital illustration so I can get a full portfolio together.

[87e30]

I don't know how I would fix these problems... but the things I notice as being odd are mostly the reflections, or gradients between panels. For example the hood to the DS fender is radically different. The DS fender is radically different from the DS door. The lower half of the DS is darker and doesn't flow into the upper half.

The front bumper and fender lack the dark accents that the rest of the car has but i'm sure you have a reason.

It's not that it looks bad, nor do I know what would make it better, it just looks very inconsistent to me.

The mirror also has a very dark gradient on it which suggests that its in a shadow, but 50% of that side of the car is quite bright. With the bottom being in a shadow region.

I guess what I'm saying is the light doesn't look even/consistent/directional to me. But this comes from a photography perspective of what is natural/believable. I know nothing about graphic design and am very impressed by just this.

[10-66kruk]

I don't know how I would fix these problems... but the things I notice as being odd are mostly the reflections, or gradients between panels. For example the hood to the DS fender is radically different. The DS fender is radically different from the DS door. The lower half of the DS is darker and doesn't flow into the upper half.

The front bumper and fender lack the dark accents that the rest of the car has but i'm sure you have a reason.

It's not that it looks bad, nor do I know what would make it better, it just looks very inconsistent to me.

The mirror also has a very dark gradient on it which suggests that its in a shadow, but 50% of that side of the car is quite bright. With the bottom being in a shadow region.

I guess what I'm saying is the light doesn't look even/consistent/directional to me. But this comes from a photography perspective of what is natural/believable. I know nothing about graphic design and am very impressed by just this.

I totally agree and know what you are saying exactly the gradient do not blend well together to make it believable that it is really a shadow. They need to gradually blend together and flow. I'm still working on it and making it right.
I'm just struggling fighting myself on to feel confident in my work that I never complete anything fully.
So this was a little test for me to just get a confidence booster and also get some criticism. I appreciate your advice and definitely will be working on making it look right.
Also if anyone would like to have their car done. I would b glad to do one for you.

[be34st]

No Roundels?

[thebutcher37]

Nice, I need to spend some time teaching myself how to use those programs...

But LOL at the fact the car in your OP looks ilke its blasting off!
Reminded me of This:

[10-66kruk]

Nice, I need to spend some time teaching myself how to use those programs...

But LOL at the fact the car in your OP looks ilke its blasting off!
Reminded me of This:

You should. It just takes lots of patience.
Lol that was great. It's also a sick picture as well.
Ya I do need roundels don't I?
Well back to the artboard.

[87e30]

I think it looks dope as is as far as being shaved.

It's also missing windshield wiper and water nozzles, piece between grill and bumper, and door handles. But I thought it looked good 'shaved.'

Keep at it. I know the feeling.

[graphikg]

A lot of detail in that huh? You can even see the smmiley of the smileys.

[10-66kruk]

Thanks again. I will definitely be taking in all the advice and keeping it in mind for next time.