Man. This needs some revision. I just read the first part. When is it due?
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Good paper. Don't have enough time to read through it all right now, but the first part sounded pretty good. There are alot of areas that aren't necessarily grammatically incorrect, but could be revised to sound/flow better. Overall it's good though, are you in college?Comment
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Yeah, I still need to take care of some grammatical fixes here and there but considering the topic I think I managed it fairly well.
And yeah, I'm at the University of Alberta. Just first year.Last edited by mamzak; 03-29-2010, 03:58 PM.Originally posted by Dozyproductions
All girls fuck but not all girls fuck around with combustion engines.Comment
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