New E30 Shirt
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plates is plural, not possessive. don't ever give grammar advice again please...thanks.
love the shirt sans the "got rake."
edit- on second glance, janderson is absolutely correct.Leave a comment:
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Maybe "e30 LOVE" on the plate, and agree that the lights look a little awkward or they just attract too much attention, but overall looks sweet.Leave a comment:
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^ I agree. Maybe just vertical lines on tails with the reverse section outlined too?Leave a comment:
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You have a decent design, but I have to agree with Josh, it will not transfer well onto a t-shirt. He wasn't bashing your design, just trying to give a little feedback..Leave a comment:
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Got rake? Hmm I think it needs something more catchy.
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Dirty 30, early model lowered. Shot from the front quarter, maybe just the outline or maybe not.
Stay strong!Leave a comment:
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Oh, good! You're one of those dickhead "artists" that can't take criticisms of their work, especially when they're constructive, not rude, much like you're acting right now. Not a single thing had to do with "the way e30's actually look". I was talking about how well it would work being printed on a t-shirt.
Get fucked. Good luck with yet ANOTHER E30 t-shirt design in an already saturated market.
And for the record, there's no apostrophe in e30s. It's not a contraction, and you're not talking about something that belongs to it.Leave a comment:
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Oh, I'm sorry you hate the way e30's actually look. Really unfortunate, since it's based precisely on a photograph of an e30. Maybe you should go buy a prius.Hmmm, not a fan. A lot of the areas of the car look really disproportionate.
And way too many lines/too much going on. The grids in the taillights, the window trims, streaks on the tires, design of the wheels. I like the design, but it wouldn't translate over to a shirt well. Needs to be much simpler.
To the rest, you're most likely right, the Got Rake is rather irrelevant, and I'd consider dropping it. What should be there instead? I feel like nothing would be also rather strange.Leave a comment:

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