Revised back of the flyer taking many pointers on here into consideration...:D
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Going back to your original response to my critique, you should not be afraid of scaring off people with a one-price one-service deal. Anyone who wants to penny-pinch is going to give you greif anyway. At least if someone is nit picky about their car, you don't have to argue with the fact that they bought the lowest cost package.
Also, as far as the back of your flyer goes, you need to put that paragraph into the center of the page and block it up into full justification. Also, get rid of that hyphen in the word, "reputable". Either reformat the text or change the wording so that it fits. Hyphens in the middle of a word are OK in newspaper articles or non-fiction novels but never are they OK on advertising literature. The only exception is on real hyphenated words like, "3-year-old" or "low-cost" but definately not repu-table when you consider your reputation to be important.Comment
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Will get on to editing that.
Yeah,,later on i'll definitely go over to offering a sole job, but now this sorta extensive serive is new round these parts. So i wanna hook as much people as possible. Including those who wouldnt want to spend 120 bucks right off the bat first time using my services.
We can all agree that my M-tech needs some rims. They sure is ugly
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