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  • TexasTerp
    No R3VLimiter
    • Jan 2009
    • 3541

    #1

    My First poster!!

    Looking for some design feedback from other graphic designers here! I'm a self taught web designer and have very little experience with print design. Below is my very first poster that I've designed for a friend's new opera company. There is a lot of symbolism in the graphic I created and I'll explain it at the bottom in the hopes at least some of it was conveyed to those who don't know the opera.

    Dimensions: 11"x17" @ 300dpi










    Graphic Explanation:
    The opera is about a love triangle. Charlotte is married to Albert but is in love with Werther. Werther writes a very emotional letter to Charlotte while he is in exile about his impending return for her. One of the high points of the opera is the "letter" aria sung by Charlotte. In the end, Werther kills himself because he cannot be with Charlotte.

    The graphic is a minimalist representation of a quill pen. The red stripe in the middle represents Werther, surrounded by Charlotte and Albert. The red droplet is a dual representation of the ink to write the letter and the blood spilled by Werther's death.

    Most of the audience will know the basic story of the opera and will know the most about the famous "letter aria" scene.

    So What do you think?
    stephenbrody.com
  • blefevre
    R3V Elite
    • Dec 2008
    • 4287

    #2
    It looks very nice! I really like the arrangement on the wording and font size. Well done.

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    • ethrtyiS
      R3V OG
      • May 2010
      • 8147

      #3
      fantastic. it looks great!
      simple and straight to the point.
      easy on the eyes.

      i've had lots of clients that want text everywhere and completely ruin it.

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      • Farbin Kaiber
        Lil' Puppet
        • Jul 2007
        • 29502

        #4
        Deep.

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        • 5Toes
          Banned
          • May 2010
          • 9836

          #5
          So what program do GDs use?

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          • pawi30
            E30 Enthusiast
            • May 2007
            • 1091

            #6
            Awesome! Only thing I'd play with is the droplet. Looks like its from clip art.
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            • RickSloan
              R3VLimited
              • Feb 2008
              • 2401

              #7
              Looks great, I am a huge fan of minimalism and clean design.

              first Presbyterian church is crowding the date a bit. I would bump the time a bit larger and then make the date a little smaller, so you can move the church down and so it fills out teh block better. its really the only thing set in.

              Also Kern the " closer to entertainment so that doesn't break that block up as much.

              That is all I see tho, very well done

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