I'd slow down the part where the chick is running her finger along the M5 as she moves to the door. That should be kinda sensual, but it looks rushed.
There's a little lack of drama as the E36 and the E30 take off after the M5.
But, I gotta tell ya, I thought that was pretty neat, and I'm a much better editor/critic than director! Well done!
There's a little lack of drama as the E36 and the E30 take off after the M5.
But, I gotta tell ya, I thought that was pretty neat, and I'm a much better editor/critic than director! Well done!
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